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Day and Night, the words they said
Spin around inside my head.
My scattered thoughts, engulfed like flames
By cruel desires I'll never tame.
I watch the World, without a care;
My concious mind not fully there.
Red blood, not flowing through my veins.
My eyes won't ever show my pain.
Tell me what I'll never know,
Tell me, let me free my soul.
Spin around inside my head.
My scattered thoughts, engulfed like flames
By cruel desires I'll never tame.
I watch the World, without a care;
My concious mind not fully there.
Red blood, not flowing through my veins.
My eyes won't ever show my pain.
Tell me what I'll never know,
Tell me, let me free my soul.
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Just felt like writing something, and seeing as my thoughts really have been in turmoil lately, i wrote this...
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I used to think that I wrote sad dark stuff because I was sad and dark. Maybe I was. But now I know I'm not and I still write sad dark stuff. I hope that you know how to keep yourself on this side of the edge, that's the most important part of dancing with that dark part of human nature most won't acknowledge.
Technically this piece is extremely effective. It has a very clear message that is right in front of the reader from line one. It's important to note also that although the message is simply delivered it is done so in a way that demands thought from the reader and inspires a deeper self analysis. Very good!
Technically this piece is extremely effective. It has a very clear message that is right in front of the reader from line one. It's important to note also that although the message is simply delivered it is done so in a way that demands thought from the reader and inspires a deeper self analysis. Very good!